I still have 1/4 of my 2nd cup of coffee from 5pm, so I guess I’ll burn the midnight oil and fix this “plot hole”.
Most likely I will have to exclude them from the scene and focus on the MC.
I guess in this book we get less naval action; pray it can get sequel(s) in the future.
Published by Minerva Marie-Sagan
Fantasy Novelist, Composer and VTuber |
HKSF-Series Book-01, Draft-06A (WIP) |
Q4-2023 Agent Querying |
Who I am matters not. What I write does.
Look not on the colours of my skin and heart.
But dance to the colours of my words in black.
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